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Old 07-04-08, 07:03 PM   #7
Kirk
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new bitch, bottom of the list... you better come with something hot
when the mag doesn't mention you at all.. its obvious you're going under, dog
^Ehhh, alright.

while i drop with the top heads, sorry bro, just what the thugs say
shit, i was getting so much props... L thought we battled on the runway
^Alright.

gotta appreciate the irony, watch me break and bash this bum
cause while no one's ever heard of L... i'm about to fucking hand him one
^Good punch. Even though everyone says L lines are played.

that about seals it right there, there's no way he can punch heavy
and i would club you so fucking badly... but you're an 'E' away from one already
^Alright.

its an odd name, but it comes in handy places, no matter how bizarre
cause i took your girl out till 3 last night, and letter have it hard
^Decent.

you can tell hes not a hit with the ladies, see, i fight em off with a bat
so when i snatch this away quickly... it'll be the most action he's ever had
^Haha.

you can say some similar stuff about us, but so different i have to laugh man
cause see, i have a power rank... you just fucking stink THAT bad
^Haha. I liked this one alot.

but i'll give you some hope alright? gotta show some love
you just may end up taking flight... after i fucking smack ya around enough
^Pretty good.



*sigh* Here we go, first battle I've had in a while,
But I can afford to be shit when I'm up against a pile,
^Alright.

We go back us two, O.G.'z in fact we were friends I'd say,
But did you lose your skill in the name change Kesse?*
^Naaah.

I mean seriously 1-2? I got a secret that I think'll help you,
Go back to riding Red Bull's coat tails is what I'd do,
^Alright but worded badly.

Or better yet just keep trying, it doesn't hurt to lose too,
My question to the league is HOW IS THIS GUY NUMBER TWO,
^Naaah.

Going into this week how could you feel good about the outcome?
I could catch 25 doin this in the streets where I come from,
^Naaah.

When I'm done, Flight, Drakel, whoever the fuck will be a new man,
But not a Queer Eye makeover, more like iSPY an incoming van,
^Naaah.

Truck, fuck that last line was filler, whatever I got this shit won already,
This is win one in my championship run, go ahead and ready the confetti,
^Not really a punch.

Better luck next time mate, we're boys so please take this beating light,
I'll save you some trouble, cuz I served my own nuts on this Flight...
^Haha.

Flight had some good ones. A few mediocre punches and then a couple hard hitting lines. Pretty consistent for the most part. A few of them could have been worded better.

LFS, you've elevated since last time I saw your battles and I didn't expect you to come as hard as you did. You had the right idea but some of your punches were worded badly and a few weren't really directed at him. Work on making sure you don't glorify, or if you do just do it in the setup, then follow through with a killer punch. Good drop though.

V/Flight
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