Hold on: FMC, aren't you the Christian Hip Hop Master?
Don't you think you've taken away from your credibility? You're sick and twisted like Dahmer? Bullshit. Are you a Christian like DMX?

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FMC:

I wasn't really feeling your verse. Weak punches (and kicks) that make people snicker rather than "OHH!".

i'll deterate your flesh like acid rain//

When the hell has acid rain really deteriarated someone's flesh? Ugh... You might as well say: "I'll cut you like a spoon"

Spelling words like "mane tane" "emcee hamer" domer, obveously, canstantly... It pisses me off. When you spell the words like that, and I'm reading it, it fucks me up when I try to pick up your flow because I run across brand new words!
deflect your armor? What???
Suburbs of Alabama? Where? Why not New Hampshire?...
Wack.
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Tact:

teach u to respect, every word I speak/
you weak, you don't compare to my talent/
I spit the real, u spit the fallace/
my lyrics crush u like a mallot/
you ain't got no talent, you just actor/

This was the best part of the battle. You have a weird flow... hard to pick up. Your links come end/front of bars like we're running a multi. I don't see that around here...
You didn't win this with flow... I would suggest thinking about your style. You had hits that actually meant something, besides wackness. I think the originality of your style compelled me to vote your way, rather than the sea of sameness FMC swims in.
Some glimmer.
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Keep working guys.

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