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Old 07-08-08, 02:51 PM   #4
M&rk
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ov's got better lyrics, but shadows presence is less corny. people wit loose lips, my fist is coligin. hot line, ov u got alot of dope lines u just sound corny in parts, like a punk rock singer. the hook is lame though for sure, needs to be chopped and lowerd or sumin. good drop, just needs improvement in parts
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