Out-Spoken
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pretty good fuckin piece here.....kirk...you did a great job...and flight summed up what you did fairly well........lay...im impressed..i didn't know you could write like this untill kirk showed me an OM of yours the other day...shit is real good....however...it seems like your addiction to multies is holding you back from more important aspects of topical writing..like...imagery...and emotion...it's not like you didn't have those things...because you did...but i believe they were less effective because of your multies.
none the less..very dope piece..if we still voted for shit around here...i would nominate this for om of the month.
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