Peace, Love, Unity
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Eh, this was alright. I'm not too much into the gangster deal but if that's you then it's alright, I guess. Need to work on your vocab. a bit more and try to make a picture of what's going on better and try not to jump from one point to another without and decent setup into the next part. But I guess it was alright. Could have ended it a bit more interesting though.
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88 miles per hour should do it.
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