yea no disrespect but i didnt like this at all. it really had no imagery, emotion was average and that was probably the best thing about it, flow and vocab was basic and you really didnt have the good of a word selection. no trying to be harsh, just speaking how i feel. looks like u didnt really even try. but stay up and try again. good luck wit ya future drops
3/10

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