Peace, Love, Unity
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This is the first thing I've read from you. It's pretty good. Short but sweet. Didn't force any vocabulary and didn't have it too simple either. Imagery was there, wasn't overflowing with it or anything, but it was still enough to keep me reading. The concept was pretty good too. You should drop more, bro.
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88 miles per hour should do it.
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