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Hi Nitro...At work right now, but I will try to give you some positive thoughts on your both your writtings...

(1) 1-my dream - This was a pretty strong writting because you were able to use some good words to describe the situation at hand and what you would settle for if you were not able to make the dream situation that you strive for.. You really want to make in the work and have a good description on what you want..

2-me envisioning my dream coming true - I liked the 1st piece better than this one. You still fit some good vocab and word usage in this piece...

Overall, I think you did a good drop on both drops in this piece...