Yo dogg, half of the stuff I read just seemed like jibber like really made no sense at all, and yo need to work on your rhyming and flow patterns, you have used good vocab though, just try to be a bit clearer on what yo sayin next time. I mean, there aint nothin wrong at all wit bein complex but sometimes people miss the whole aim of bein complex and it just turns into meaningless points. Nah what I'm sayin dogg? Sure y'all keep improvin from that..

Peace Out Yo!!!!

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