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		fuck this bitch, lets switch it up, i'll be the one to push and pull 
so i take this Ram by the horns, cause he's got a hold of all the bull 
this was pretty weak, the ram nameplay could been used better 
yeah thats right, you're shit, and don't act like its not fucking true 
see i'm fly for real... they just fucking buzz around you 
dopeness yo still could worded it better tho but +1 
and what a fucking loser, seriously, i'm tired of being nice 
cause when he says 'check 16', thats just the fucking girls he likes 
lol i the check 16 was aight, but u ruined it with the wording 
see my name is for my punches, so bitch, my hits wont be subtle 
cause when i fucking spit, i'll make sure Ramcees nothing but knuckles 
nah weak wordplay 
there's just no dodging me, i'm dropping hot, and never stop attacking, man 
cause when i bring in my seige, i just keep fucking battering Ram 
dope wordplay +2 
i'll shut ya down, seriously i'm not playing, no need to make it tragic 
i'm getting rid of RAM faster than computer porn addicts 
was aight +3 
this battle is a joke, you bow to me, so just fucking stop, bitch 
cause if you ever won the contendor ship... i'd make sure to throw you off it 
nah seen this concept already and it's weak anyways 
so i'll finish wrecking this bitch, fuck rights, ima break the whore's neck 
cause Cee'll get clubbed so fucking badly... i'll have PETA on my doorstep 
this was straight, +4 
 
vs. 
 
kid ima stunner, I come with concepts, that’ll totally wreck ya 
He acting all prepared for this battle…like he came in a stretcher 
too simple though 
Ya got nothing between da ears, of course im droppin u w/ ease 
voters are only leaning towards You…cuz they enjoying da breeze 
i dont even get this and dont think its good anyways 
u aint on my level, only ppl w/ a fear of heights should battle u clown 
cuz here punches can take Flight, w/ out ever leavin the fukin ground 
this was aight +1, coulda worded it better tho 
dude, im juz slappin u around, im not about to disappoint my crowd 
Unless its Your funeral tomorrow……I aint letting No Body Down! 
lol, this wad dope +2 
Cats sayin this’ll be a tight match up, u gotta be shitting me Dudes? 
Of Course he rolls with the punches, he rolled wen I kicked him too! 
i like this, it's decent +3 
im takin this serious man, I hope u didn think I was playin with you 
So if I just killed off all ur Chances, im sorry…I was aiming for you 
this was aight but i can't quote it 
I always knew I was intimidating…but its a lot worst then it seemed 
Cuz this dude fumbled a line, every time…I looked up at my screen 
really wack 
u shoulda taken this Chance, n tried to drop somethin really sick son 
Cuz u was always going out on a limb…I just havnt decided which 1 
plaaayeedd 
 
Ramcees ur decent, but stop using played rhymes or simple rhymes, use more rhymes like that "funeral, not letting no body down" shit cuz when u start using clever wordplay like that, that's when u'll start winning all your matches 
 
Flight, you did ya thing, but i feel sometimes u got sick concepts but then you dont word them into sick punches and it means nothing so i cant quote them, work on that and try and have set ups that are relevant to the next line not random stuff 
 
so i got this 4-3 for Flight 
 
v/flight 
		
	
		
		
		
		
		
	
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