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Old 07-14-08, 12:45 AM   #11
JTR
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fuck this bitch, lets switch it up, i'll be the one to push and pull
so i take this Ram by the horns, cause he's got a hold of all the bull
this was pretty weak, the ram nameplay could been used better
yeah thats right, you're shit, and don't act like its not fucking true
see i'm fly for real... they just fucking buzz around you
dopeness yo still could worded it better tho but +1
and what a fucking loser, seriously, i'm tired of being nice
cause when he says 'check 16', thats just the fucking girls he likes
lol i the check 16 was aight, but u ruined it with the wording
see my name is for my punches, so bitch, my hits wont be subtle
cause when i fucking spit, i'll make sure Ramcees nothing but knuckles
nah weak wordplay
there's just no dodging me, i'm dropping hot, and never stop attacking, man
cause when i bring in my seige, i just keep fucking battering Ram
dope wordplay +2
i'll shut ya down, seriously i'm not playing, no need to make it tragic
i'm getting rid of RAM faster than computer porn addicts
was aight +3
this battle is a joke, you bow to me, so just fucking stop, bitch
cause if you ever won the contendor ship... i'd make sure to throw you off it
nah seen this concept already and it's weak anyways
so i'll finish wrecking this bitch, fuck rights, ima break the whore's neck
cause Cee'll get clubbed so fucking badly... i'll have PETA on my doorstep
this was straight, +4

vs.

kid ima stunner, I come with concepts, that’ll totally wreck ya
He acting all prepared for this battle…like he came in a stretcher
too simple though
Ya got nothing between da ears, of course im droppin u w/ ease
voters are only leaning towards You…cuz they enjoying da breeze
i dont even get this and dont think its good anyways
u aint on my level, only ppl w/ a fear of heights should battle u clown
cuz here punches can take Flight, w/ out ever leavin the fukin ground
this was aight +1, coulda worded it better tho
dude, im juz slappin u around, im not about to disappoint my crowd
Unless its Your funeral tomorrow……I aint letting No Body Down!
lol, this wad dope +2
Cats sayin this’ll be a tight match up, u gotta be shitting me Dudes?
Of Course he rolls with the punches, he rolled wen I kicked him too!
i like this, it's decent +3
im takin this serious man, I hope u didn think I was playin with you
So if I just killed off all ur Chances, im sorry…I was aiming for you
this was aight but i can't quote it
I always knew I was intimidating…but its a lot worst then it seemed
Cuz this dude fumbled a line, every time…I looked up at my screen
really wack
u shoulda taken this Chance, n tried to drop somethin really sick son
Cuz u was always going out on a limb…I just havnt decided which 1
plaaayeedd

Ramcees ur decent, but stop using played rhymes or simple rhymes, use more rhymes like that "funeral, not letting no body down" shit cuz when u start using clever wordplay like that, that's when u'll start winning all your matches

Flight, you did ya thing, but i feel sometimes u got sick concepts but then you dont word them into sick punches and it means nothing so i cant quote them, work on that and try and have set ups that are relevant to the next line not random stuff

so i got this 4-3 for Flight

v/flight
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