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Old 07-16-08, 06:53 PM   #12
Lay.
don't try.
 
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this kid can’t win fairly.. been breaking rules, he’s wrong..
so if we see Big pimpin’… it’s coz he’s biting Jay-Z’s song
k.
had to use jack’s pic to clown him, well.. if I used urs it’d be wild
coz they say the picture tells a story – of a broke ass crack whores child
mehh.
fo’real though dude, I’m kiddin.. ur life is truly beast son
shit, if wolves come out for a full moon..
..what kind of creature comes out for a keith one?
na..
but ya should’ve seen the letters that came in when I said u’d be winnin
there was some ROFLZ, a few LMFAO’s & an OMFG you gotta be kiddin
ehh okay.
& you ‘n ur boys handle the smoke.. kid, get back to reality
only way you pass the dutch is by way of a technicality
hahaa.
now look, s’like Hey diddle diddle bitch! my nursery rhymes are mean
& the cow jumped over the moon..
..like you & ur girl freestylin’ on a trampoline
eh.
ur not champ material, so nameplays are appropriate I felt
coz BigChase is fitting in how it’ll take u forever to get close to the belt
lol k.
got love for ur country, well ain’t that a noble role
& with patriots like this guy..
..I’m actually NOT surprised they lost the last superbowl
decent
I don’t care that he’s hungry & poor, my punches’ll maim this whore
Coz I got a stake in this battle that he offered to prostitute himself for
mehh.. k
ur a raggedy ass fashion victim, I’m not being foolish
but if drainpipes come back into style, at least ur house’ll be the coolest
k.

vs

quick quick quick
Solo's a bitch from April to July, December to June
Your name says it all, your the king of only you
na, bad concept..an worded badly.
you can write what you want, i'll match it word for word
solo complains about gas prices, but is used to self serve
k good concept. coulda been worded better again.
I'ma murk this perv, leave him him sulking and bawlin
you couldn't give him the W even if he was bar Brolin
na. weak
Grim Reapers calling, smack out his teeth with my pimp ring
I slept with bitches, but I won't wake up with the king
no.
Seen him at a gay bar, King stays away from the babes beside his mom
this Solo ain't gettin Leigh-ed, so he'll have to settle with his Han
was that a star wars punch? no.
Could destroy his rep but instead I'll blow the scene
I thought you were Brandon Jennings..
.. the way Solo's oversea-n
weak attempt.

I was bein harsh in my voting, only cuz people need to step it up in the league. Take time on your verses..you have all week. Nick I feel ya kinda rushed yours a bit. I'm pretty sure you knew Keiths abilities..so thats understanding. An then Keith rushed it which gave you an evenn greater advantage, Chase ya gotta work on wording your concepts harsher. Nothin really that great except for that self serve concept.. Nick you had some ups n downs but you had some pretty funny lines in the mix.

v/Nick ez.
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