Light Weight
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IP:
no offense but this wasnt a hard decision, i knew comin in to the tourney that yung was the weakest link. no disrespect its just i could tell there wasnt much topical experience. you did look like you tried harder than u do in most of ur text battles though, but when it comes to topicals i never go wit simplicity and simple would describe your verse in one word
keth? dont know what was goin on. most likely because u did it in four minutes and new your opponent, but u know and i know that against any real topical opponent,you wouldve probably lost with that verse. was still good enough here though. u actuall had all of the things needed to make a topical verse such as emotion and imagery. dont get me wrong i loved the angle you took on this, just i know u wouldve executed it thirty times better wit the right amount of time.
v/keith
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C.S. The Definition of a Vet...
Phase 1 Topical Co-Captain
Phase 1 Site Battle Winner by knockout
...Is to have Served Your Faction
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