It was alright. Your rhymescheme and wording could have been a bit better -- a little to elmentary to me but nothing heavily drastic. Surprisingly, what you had carried an alright flow to it. I was able to read it like I was an audio head. You do audio? You flow like it. Your emotion was decent, it could have been a bit better. And emotionally, this was a good read. But nothing amazing. Keep elevating and writing man. I'll keep my eyes opened for future releases by you.

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