STROBE's Favorite Rapper
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ok this was cool.i liked your imagery and thats what made this good.its a little too short and didnt expand on the topic well enough and you went from watching the person to actually being physically involed which kinda threw me off.its good on text but i dont think it would make a good spoken word peice but thats not a problem.keep it up cuz you have potential to be a decent poet.
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Overall Rapverse Record Including Leagues
94-29
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