yo was up Narcicyt? yo I this here was pretty decent, but I've seen alot better from u... decent rhymes, some things just didn't make sence, and at points it seemed like it was going nowhere...
The flow was aight... vocab as usually pretty nice...
Yo u can do better then this man come on... oh and if you get a chance peep my joint I posted on that gettin' slept on thing...

Oh yo I read what you said about posting like 7 rhymes and getting almost no replies... yo man, I think you should post one or at the most 2 joints at the same time in the same forum, then wait for some replies... once that's taken care of, post your other ones... see it's like that physics shit... heard the one about the marvels and the hole? put one or two... they got through the hole... put a whole bunch of them in... they clutter... not one goes in... lol!!!!!!!!!! is this making sense... cats bout to quote me now... lol... peace