I made it and il end it
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IP:
Great vocab dude, flowed without any effort at all.Good topic you used here and stayed on topic throughout.Really enjoyed reading this piece + i must say i was'nt too surprized to see another well put together piece from you got soul.
cant really see how you could improve it.
Great work. Keep it up yeah.
Peace
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