Yo check it....

This is my first time rappin//
take this time to see what happins//
hope I do good//
and get a good review//
i heard this s* is harsh on the new//
take this time for you to hear my s*//
god I hope I don't embarrasse me on this//
it's hard to come up with rhymes to pleasure the living//
hope you like what'cha hearing//
my words has these feeling//
when you sitting here reading//
HA b* my words are conceiving//
i'm about to give up ya'll and leaving ya'll with the suspense of my next song//
OH MY F*N GOD what am i doing//
this song f*n sucked i need improving//

peace