Out-Spoken
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i don't think i've ever seen anything from you...so i can't judge whether or not you still got it....but i can tell you something you have..
potential....here is how to get better....expand your vocab...improve your rhyme scheme...use mutlis..and spell shit correctly...why? because the content in this piece was good...even if it did remind me of "compromise".....but the things you say...wern't said in the most articulate way when it comes to rap...just keep practicing..and the rest will come naturally....PM me if you want any personal advice for your next piece.
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Seek & Destroy
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Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate.
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