Constructive Critisism:

1. Vocab...

~Needs elevation....not alot, just enough to livin up the verses you write...

2. Flow...

~Not bad...but your lines are either to long, or to damn short...lol

Maximum: 16 syllables
Minimum: 13 Syllables

3. Structure...

~See "2. Flow"...

4. Overall talent...

~This verse was descent, not the greatest, but not the worst either, just work on the key elements listed above...

6/10

Stay Spittin...

P.e.a.c.e.