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Old 09-04-08, 02:12 PM   #7
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The beat is off the hook unfortunatly you didnt do it justice. I felt your delivery was strongly lacking my guesses are you were reading your lyrics. The hook wasn't differentiated enough from the verse to stand out. You can make it work just work on your delivery. Pause at times to let the meaning sink in and ply with your flow. Stay up.
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