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Old 09-08-08, 11:18 PM   #5
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yeah, this is good enough to download.. deffo deserves some props..

i think you still got room to elevate on keeping your rhyming a little more tight and solid, a bit more tech... aswell as making your vocals sound a bit more gritty n raw if you know what i mean by that.. and maybe more variation in song concepts.. only minor issues but..

but everyones got room to elevate.. first time ive ever heard your songs and this is actually quite a good production.. all i can say is go and get heard.. your style is chilled out, your pretty good at writing those deep tracks about lifes hardships and over comming rough times... i like that. but i wanna see some diff styles from you.

overall i think you got a lot more road to travel on your journey.. but im diggin your steez bro.. dont stop writing....
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