yo dogg u gota get straight to the point, most ppl on rb only reply to pieces that are 'short'.. not all but "most"
try n compress ur direction of wats happening in shorter form..
sought of like a poem with its compression.. but not a 'poem'
but the topic was unoriginal, not saying dont do popular topics, just that more ppl view the pieces with originality.. almost everyone does this mistake, and some flow wasn't in shape or maybe i just couldn't see it .. keep spittin
peace out...