i get the gist of ya intent wit this piece son...the only thing is it sound very elementary...n ya senteces are kinda screwed

no longer bein a child
grew up like a blossoming rose < grew up...or grown up
a man from head to toes < head to toes...or toe
and yet im still not a full man < still notta man woulda made sense..no such thing as a full man


its all good wit these lil mistakes ma nig...im just elevating ya..for i know next time you wont make this error....but the overall concept fo ya piece was nice...

holla

one...hunnet

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