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Old 11-21-08, 04:38 PM   #5
M&rk
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like the nas line. be a dope track to do on stage cuz the flow is simple and your lyrics aren't complex, what did you say backwords? the second verse is a million times better for lyrics and flow. first verse was more gangster than i care to hear, second verse was much better, hook was a simple club type , but this would be good on stage but what i dont like is the first verse, hook, and all that g talk.
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