LOL dude, those lines are just saying something. Like I said, in real life you might be able to get away with personals like that.

But in text that shit weak, and it has NO signs of anything witty or clever. go to any of the top leagues on the net to see how those punches get voted as.

and don't give the "it was keyed" argument. I've cyphered for fun on AIM with on RV, JTR, Mim, Nick Fletcher just to name some. And all of them still dropped stuff that would be considered nice, or decent at least and was completely off top going off what I just said. Then heads from Rapmusic like Oneduh, or Baron Mynd, they can drop some sick fucking shit in seconds if you give them a concept.

fact is, you know it wasn't good. And prolly not your best text effort. But don't sit there and make excuses justifying why it was weak. It was a bad verse.

And lol nobody said you were bad overall. Heck, I don't even remember checking out any of your verses except this one and then that last battle here on RV. So no need to start throwing disses at other people's skill.

I've seen plenty of text battles, and I can tell you that both of those verses are trash, regardless of the time it took to drop. I won't say yours is better, but it was less trashier for sure.

Just my honest opinion, not trying to put you down. Just answering your question

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