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But if you want to compare one of my better verses, here. This was in the BBL league ran by David Lama on bragginwrites dot com

Contendership match v.s. Prhyme. A league, you'd prolly go 0-84430944903 in with your played out wordplay.

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v.s. Prhyme (2006)

Ok, I admit. F'real, I might be rattled
Cuz you'll have twice the BRAGGIN WRITES as me.. if he votes in this battle
I'm Precize when I Merc. My Pens Ill, so Eudead, g
Cuz SPuL Wilmer Deryou.. and those are just 6 cats you can't beat
This kid a myspace groupie, man. This shit's some utter nonsense
So when I leave a bulletin him.. he'll just rush to leave me comments
God used the alphabet to give him a sign. Just listen, and you can see
Should he continue rapping? For the answer, look two letters before P
Bitches say yes to me 24/7/365, don't play me yo
While that number above ^^^ is your maybe/yes/no ratio
This kid's lonely as a fuck. A virgin, I could of sworn
Only time PC a trojan.. is from looking at internet porn
The critcis never lie. They can't get enough of this guy
Cuz if it's thumbs up for Phryme... he's just hitching a ride
He reps it like he hood. pleaseeee... this kid is finished
He's not a G..P A nerd...
... and got ^^^^ one higher than his win percentage
Your record don't mean shit, you can ask a friend or 2
6-1 is just the height my uppercut'll send you too
I noticed you bit Meth's style, you can bet that he'd be mad
Cuz P.O.D's on ^^^ so much... the band checked into rehab
I'm a beast. Knockin' your ass flat out in the worst way
I'll leave you with such a smashing L,P..
... it'll go platinum on the first day

EZ

And your whole argument of using multi's. It's a battle. The sooner you realize the actual punch matters more than how it "sounds" in TEXT, the sooner you might actually win battles. This isn't audio, this isn't real life battling. It's text. So don't even bother doing text if you don't have the intelligence to know that it involves changing up your style a bit.