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Old 12-16-08, 03:34 AM   #2
Jay Rose
I don't lose
 
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i like it but its not done yet...needs a half time bridge, i build up secondary beat through the second verse and second hook....cut it off for the 3rd verse, and put it alll in there on the last hook....could be a dope song
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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