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Old 12-28-08, 04:38 PM   #2
M&rk
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dat cassidy at the beginning, and the hook? anyway, u second and sounded the way you sound, u tried flippin a few played concepts, like that flip like they should be in a gym line. but uh, heres another listen.
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cabalas, hot line. could use more adlibs and switch ups, but this more hard than catchy. i aint talkin fat cal when im talkin about 40 and 50, hot line. good grimmy street type shit. just not quiet my steez. think u hit what U were goin for though
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