for some reason i felt there was suposed to be a rhyme scheme up in there...if there was...it was terrible...but ya structure is what fucked it up...ya concept was nice though....just revise ya structre n fix parta ya vocab son

holla

one...hunnet

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RN Vs RB WAR!!....yr 2000...vet~~YEA I SAID VET!! WHAT YOU WANT ME TO PROVE IT? STEP THEN YOU FUCKING HOMO'S