first guy good slow steady flow creepy too can hardly understand what he's sayin.

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could put more into the hook. but i like the dubs after u talk other dude says somein, thats catchy. should do that through the whole hook sound like bone thugs, its ill.

your verse. u should lower your voice a lil and slow up a lil or dub your lines more so they are easier to hear and catchier
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last guy when the beat drops, is the catchiest cool shit i think
he also comes in good. i like his flow the best on here i think. im diggin his shit the best for sure, the way he dubs it makes it catchier, should put a bridge in at the end or just that dudes dubs that were on the hook.

could have a lot done to it to make it worth bumpin in a car for strangers, but def decent

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