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IP:
alright.. first time ive heard your stuff...
kage needs more high frequency in his vocal... easy to fix... i think the 'manny fresh' guy has the best vocal on the track... you were ok, but again the highs need a little more.. i aint much of a fan of this slow flow type stuff, but i aint holding it against ya track.. few production issues which we all have when we dont have pro set ups... i noticed you were talking about being underground, man one thing i can say is that your style is probably more geared towards mainstream gangsta rap on this track... could be sellable if you were working with a professional producer with a bit of mad technique....
you should try using more multis in your flow you sort of need to these days if you wanna sell it also the hook really needs something more its not catchy enough... id prefer to hear something faster from you....
but then the next guy might hear this and absolutly love it so really its just a matter of style choice I think if I look at it unbiased which is what i try and do with all tracks... just the production i recon you guys need to amp up on and be a little more catchy with the hooks...
its workable though........
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