i dont think u hit your adlibs right, seems like your off with 'em and it takes away from the punchline rather than add to it cuz it makes is less clear rather than clearer and catchy and stand out. u really need to make your lines stand out more rather than havin all of them just flow together and nothin really standing out. sound like some of your P's are poppin, need a better filter.
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i'ver heard u on more commercial beats and u have the similar flow through out every beat, seems like u should chop it up more and use less effects or sumin. cuz i dont think just your accent it makin it hard for me to hear you.

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