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Old 01-14-09, 03:18 PM   #4
M&rk
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odd why u dont have it at the top. like the hook, accent is kinda funny, i like it when u switch your voice on the hook, and when u get like a lil grimy in parts, im thinkin u should lower your voice a lil on the verse, the hook when your singin is ill, it makes me wanna get a verse on it for real. easy topic to spit to. good shit, on thing i got to improve is to play with your voice a lil more to show more emotion, cuz the parts u did sounded the best.
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