do you need help with quality? cuz it seems you do'
the beat seems like loud compared to you...your dubs need to be on more...they take away instead of add to your shit...its cool your verse was okay but not intresting...and your voice changes from verse 1, to 2...i dont have a problem with either but i think consistancy would be better suited for this type of track....the hook is blah, but its cool cuz i dont quite grasp hooks all the time....good start....go back read some stuff on quality. and work on making a song as a peice of art and figure out how everything ties together with everything else

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