yea first guys lows were overpoweringgggg....slow flow is kind good for a start off/build up hope its not the same all the way. he ran out of breath a few times, lost me a few times...its okay the dubs need to be on...needs to be bigger...more layers n shit
your dubs are WAYYYYYY to loud you dont want them overpowering your main vocals...
you sound hesitant...relax a lil, show me some swag, i dont want to hear your lyrics...i want to hear you rap...there is a difference!
hook is boring sorry...
the 3rd guy has the most swagger...he went off on some weird shit tho...lyrically was just confusing...to me....

not a bad start...keep elevating

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