Beat - + good shit.

breath control on the first guy is the worst part. he's got a nice flow IMO it fits the track and presents his own swag. But the breathing is so easy to make out it kinda kills it for me. Nice content/Flow work on the mixing sound/breath control.

Eh, the hook needs some work, good content/concept, but the way its dubbed/drop in of the steel sky part doesn't quite fit.

second guy's emotion isn't placed well, doesn't sound that enthusiastic just kinda spitting/reading it without putting his attitude it.

hook.

third guys verse is the best IMO, his emotion is on, his flow is on, but the doubles in it sound a little off at first. Also the beat drop he should bang it out ya more ya know.


with some fine tuning, it could be CRAZY i think, just need to work a little more.

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