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Old 01-24-09, 02:46 PM   #9
Young Kidd (LM)
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This guys the type to get liquid courage from wine spirits
So his sights a blur b and he can't seem to fine lyrics
eh. extremely week. kind of just a throw away bar really. like you were gonna lead up to something but couldnt.

No hunch why no ones support'n ya junk prolly cuz thas one way to be force'n a punch
4 Down?
Bitch resort to the punt, personals ya left to make up like masochist divorced to a drunk
Multi's were hella forced, and the punch had potential but you kinda just knocked it off

one way
What the fuck kinda name is that I can immediately tell you lacking wits
but with a flow like that no one expects you to catch my drift
Stretched, Better than the first guys first punch but sitll very weak and easy.
I'll smack this bitch cause your even to broke to buy a win man.....
was out on the streets Tuesday yelling "change"......with a tin can
Best punch by far, and it was still kinda weak. the set up wasn't really a set up, just a filler line so you could throw the other out. the last line was what actaulyl made it already with the attempt at wordplay

kinda weak battle, both attempted well just didn't follow through. work on wordplay, punchs, even a little vocab.

but hell..i have the same problem. ha
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