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Old 01-24-09, 02:50 PM   #10
Civil.
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This guys the type to get liquid courage from wine spirits
So his sights a blur b and he can't seem to fine lyrics
Could have been worded better, weak concept. Overall not really a punch.
No hunch why no ones support'n ya junk prolly cuz thas one way to be force'n a punch
4 Down?
Bitch resort to the punt, personals ya left to make up like masochist divorced to a drunk
This def. had potential man. With re wording, and shortening up ya lines a bit
This could have been dope, but it was poorly executed.

one way
What the fuck kinda name is that I can immediately tell you lacking wits
but with a flow like that no one expects you to catch my drift
Simple, played. But a descent attempt
I'll smack this bitch cause your even to broke to buy a win man.....
was out on the streets Tuesday yelling "change"......with a tin can
Nice.


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