dude, crossfire. that multi uages does not work out for you, you gotta shorten up your lines. and concentrate harder on your wordplay. Dont try and put so much into every punch.


LP-your bars weren't great. You had some ok attempts, but nothin came in the end. Your lines fell off, with what was original bein said in your set ups..

v/LP, only cuz his bars were readable, and not all mumbled together with forced wordplay

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