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Old 01-26-09, 11:03 PM   #8
Civil.
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It's been a while for me kid, but there's only one way to win,
And the secret to success is not dropping like him ^.

^i've seen this used against him too many times.


I admire your strength even if you're whack and confused,
'Cause yeah, you are just like Freddy..
...............................you keep coming back here to lose.

Kind of simple, but definately a nice feed. Thats a big part of this
league, being able to see the ability of a battler feeding. Cool punch.




Don’t act dope your quite possibly the weakest on the scene
I’m like Freddy Krueger…..you’ll only beat me in your dreams

This had potential, its kind of a played concept. But your wording
was almost there. I think this could have been dopeish. ok bar


But don’t worry homie, I’ll give a good reason for you to sit and pretend
Cause when I knock your teeth out you’ll have something to spit in the wind

eh, nice wordplay. Nicely worded, but harshness of the punch? not really!


Close one here, but i'm gon have to go for one way.
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