LP: I didn't really feel them, they were weak I understand them but wording makes it hard too.

cross: I didn't see a punch in there, your concentrating on ryhming and flow in a punchline battle league, you should try more on shorter lines with a direct punch or personal, the first line should be a set up to your second meaning they should both tie into each other in relation. and the second line is your punch thats the main line that people look at to determine a winner. Of course multis and wordplay and other effects help make it stand out to the reader, but at the end of the day the punch decides the vote. No disrespect dude

vote: LP

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