its wasnt all that good, im sayin i couldnt get into it. it was to short.
try slowin down take some time and write a lil longer next time and its the last bar didnt even go with the first 3
keep practicine and read what other catz on here write
dont streal their style or rhymes but use their styles to develop your own.
keep droppin youll get better and try battlin too if u havent already ull see a style u might wanna try idk
juss my opinion good luck dawg
keep spittten