it feels like you just started recording...youve been rapping but you just started recording, eh? sell your story more. you gotta hamm that shit up to make it utterly obvoius you believe what your rappin bout. and your quality is blah, vocals are toooo loud...the beat is your friend trust me, dont bury it like that.... cuz more beat will add more emotion...some other minor recording errors but nothing i could bang out n fix with one post... not bad on the rap part tho....just keep checking out tutorials and growing with your mixes....
return some feed on my shit tho man...tell me what you think
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead