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Old 02-02-09, 11:01 AM   #6
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O shiit. Nice, good match up here. just like i thought.



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your well informed about my illness, without knowing the issue
and I'll let you know from the jump... that's going to kill you!


^this was really just meh. worded well, but just not harsh.

and then there was TO's 1st bar

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this kids sex life is ghastly, he’s opted for jumpin old peoples bones
his penis is so pro’grammes it broadcasts in retirement homes


^this one was holdin a good concept, but i just didn't like it. Maybe it was
the penis shit, or maybe just your set up. But really not that good


This one in my opinion came down to both of your 2nd bars


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& I consider ya mom my equal, coz we both got guerilla tactical thinking
I plan raids n’ ambushes, her hairy ass climbed the Empire State Building


^this shit was worded nicely, wasn't a bad punch either.


then bob's...


Quote:
I dont listen to whipper snappers, go blow a fog horn bastard
it's like your k9 disappeared in your rhymes, all this 'dog gone' wackness


^lmfao, that shit was sick. funny, nicely worded. Not bad



damn this is really fuckin close man, both did a good job. But i guess i'm gon have to go with bob on this one. definately a funnier line, but all together slightly harsher as well. good bout u guys.


v/bob
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