not a bad freestyle for someone startin out in this game ..
but some of rhymes didnt make sense .. example
put my hands around your throat and make ya ass gag/
laughing at ya ass because your shittin in a bag/
can an ass gag ?? i get wat ur meaning here but dont put things to rhyme just to rhyme, make sense with them and ur piece will be alot better.. flow was good, keep spitting though and looking foward to seeing ur new pieces
peace out...