I think lyrically you got potential, you got that street shit that folks can feel... but right now, everywhere else needs work... flow especially, heard you slurrin' a lotta words and stumblin', tryin' to fit too much in a line... delivery needs feeling, emphasis, needs to come to life... quality kills all new cats, if you're gonna get serious you'll need better equipment and some time learnin' how to mix and produce a track... or find someone that will help you... keep at it yo...

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