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Old 02-03-09, 05:05 PM   #4
Young Kidd (LM)
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1st Hook double is too loud.
the original hook is straight, just turn that double down a little.

1st guy, flow is pretty good, swag, but content is a little sketchy at first. but that swagger and flow is sick i gotta give that.
just work a little on makin it understandable more ya know

ah the doubles was fixed on this hook. good shit. likin it.

2nd guy, you right?, good flow, and content is sick. swag is pretty good.
pretty much my fav on the track. kept it on a point and punchin ya know.

3rd guy, got a good swag and lyrics needs to work on a slowin it a little or just making his flow fit the beat better ya know.
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