.......eh i didn't like none of these. honestly, Mardu you didn't have bad concepts man
but i dont think you worded them right. maybe it was the multi usage you were trying, but it didn't fit. the 1st bar wasn't really affected too much by it, but the harshness in ya 1st bar was weak...then in ya 2nd bar, the multi usage fucked it all up...and the bar was wack...


then...coke, ha! this by far the worst thing i've seen you drop yet. Your 1st bar was nicely worded. and the punch was there. just kind of weak. and your 2nd bar was just wack. sorry. i've seen you drop way better...i dont know man.

both really off this weak. not sure what happened.

v.coke barely

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