Watch me kill this 'fruit', home boy is such a fuckin sqaure
That when i write MC, Entite always seems to diss a pear
lol. square...ah haven't seen someone called that in ages.
i dunno why others dont like this line... i mean it was kinda weak but...
still an alright opener punch... i chuckled...ha

Base the money on the outcome while im season the plate
Leave'n A philly ate especially when the cheese is at steak
I've seen the concept before, but never that same flip. i'll give it to you that it's a good line but its worded very...obscurely for me...like i couldn't catch it the first time...alright opener..on the same par as Coke's..

Would lock this coke dealer up..its annoying but tempt'n
But he's a faggot in prison....the only one enjoy'n his sentence
ewww..this one is super played...fag/likin prison lines are so hard to flip these days..eh... you should of flipped the structure and put these as the starting lines...because at least the other had a little bang...


Abused as a child, i this a whorish lady...aint no dude
See why you a signle no name!! cuz this Ma's Rud(e)
nice flip on the name i think..but it really has no connect...its could have been worded better...ya know...like it was just quickly done.
overall its almost as weak as his ender...

both attempted at some wordplay...well they connected the wordplay just some played shit ya know.
hmm... i guess when i read em together i gotta give it to coke for more connectin punch because of better wording and easier comprehension...
not saying that mardu's wasn't easy to comprehend just very played and could have been better...

v/ coke

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